LachlanHuddy
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Complete Doctor Madden, Draft 2
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Completing the first re-write (i.e. second draft) of my feature script Doctor Madden
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 LachlanHuddy
January 12, 2018, 9:38 PM
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| Very happy with the direction of the changes and satisfied that the substantial rewrites constitute a solid evolution of the first draft. For the third, will be looking to clarify Madden's underlying motivation for Sandcastle and ramp up tension between Sam and him based upon Madden's extremely evil history. Also there's obviously a theme emerging about human nature and, hate to say it, what it means to be human (sci-fi cliche of the millennium) that will be worth exploring to tie everything together. | |
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Very happy with the direction of the changes and satisfied that the substantial rewrites constitute a solid evolution of the first draft. For the third, will be looking to clarify Madden's underlying motivation for Sandcastle and ramp up tension between Sam and him based upon Madden's extremely evil history. Also there's obviously a theme emerging about human nature and, hate to say it, what it means to be human (sci-fi cliche of the millennium) that will be worth exploring to tie everything together.
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